Whenever possible, replace instances of the verb “to be” with stronger verbs.
|The radio transmits the data back to the main control station.||The data is transmitted by the wireless modules back to the main control station.|
|This new device easily integrates into existing systems.||This new device is easily integrated into existing systems.|
|Some, many||A number of|
|To||As a means of|
|Now||At the present time|